We had to describe the spooky house with a buddy in our class. My buddy wrote in orange and I wrote in red. We had to write 100 words on the dot, some people went over 100 but me and my buddy did not.
You have used some great descriptive words which makes me feel like I am in the house. This sounds like a scary house I would definitely not like to visit! I would be screaming too!
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You have used some great descriptive words which makes me feel like I am in the house. This sounds like a scary house I would definitely not like to visit! I would be screaming too!
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